Coolness
Nice effects and some sweet action, but if the only part of your "story" is conveyed through the korean text, it fails in that respect. People fighting with amazing super powers? Sweet. Random fades to noise and epic words like 'eternal' and 'revenge'? Okay... My suggestions are to work on timing and movement of characters throughout the screen. It was epic and all, but confusing and too fast. None of it conveyed your "story", but it was well animated. Keep working.